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#1 2014-11-16 19:50:00

bluesguy63
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"Lilly Creek" original acoustic....

My first attempt at song writing....comments/critique appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/bluesguy1963/lil … k-original

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#2 2014-11-18 07:39:01

Marcus
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Re: "Lilly Creek" original acoustic....

I like the song, sets a nice mood. I like the guitar and melody.

There were a few pitchy notes on the vocals, mainly by the end of the song I think. Shouldn't be any trouble to fix, just go over it a few times and really know where the melody will go. Sometimes I got the feeling the melody was very low for you, but could be related to recording volume as well.

I'm gonna assume it's recorded live with one microphone or device like a phone. The vocals are low in volume compared to the guitar. So much that I have a hard time hearing the lyrics in some parts. Could the mic be moved closer to your mouth when recording?

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#3 2014-11-18 21:28:17

bluesguy63
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Re: "Lilly Creek" original acoustic....

Thanks Marcus...

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#4 2014-11-27 16:19:26

bluesguy63
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Re: "Lilly Creek" original acoustic....

Any other thoughts? Happy Thanks giving....

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#5 2014-11-27 16:37:11

bono1982
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Re: "Lilly Creek" original acoustic....

Hi Bluesguy, i like your song...!  though, I hear you a little unconfortable with the key of the song, why dont you try to sing it a half or a whole step higher, i think it will make a difference, also you´ll be able to sing it louder


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