TMV Partners

You are not logged in.


Announcement

GO HERE: www.TheModernVocalistWorld.com

ATTENTION TMV WORLD FORUM MEMBERS! YOU NEED TO GO LOGIN AND/OR REGISTER AT THE NEW AND IMPROVED TMV WORLD FORUM SYSTEM.



CLICK THIS LINK TO GO TO THE NEW FORUM. WHEN YOU ARRIVE AT THE NEW FORUM, LOGIN OR REGISTER AND THEN CLICK ON "GETTING STARTED". ALL OF THE POSTS AND TOPICS HAVE BEEN MIGRATED OVER AND EXISTING MEMBERS WILL BE LINKED BACK TO ALL THEIR POSTS IN THE NEW SYSTEM AFTER YOU LOGIN.

www.TheModernVocalistWorld.com

IF YOU ARE A NEW VISITOR THAT JUST JOINED US, YOU ARE INVITED TO COME OVER TO OUR NEW FORUM SYSTEM. CLICK THIS LINK TO GO THERE AND REGISTER.

www.TheModernVocalistWorld.com

Adverts

#1 2014-11-01 04:22:52

bono1982
TMV Forum Member
From: Argentina
Registered: 2014-10-28
Posts: 31
Reputation :   
Website

What a wonderful world

Hello everybody! I`m new in the site. Please feel free to comment, thank you :)

https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1/wh … -14-725-pm


check out to my souncloud page! :) 
https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1

Offline

 

2014-11-01 04:22:52

AdBot
Advertisements

#2 2014-11-03 02:47:55

ronws
TMV Forum Member
Registered: 2010-05-23
Posts: 11731
Reputation :   139 

Re: What a wonderful world

I think you did a really good job. Your articulation of english is good. Of course, you don't sound american but that doesn't matter, to me. I can understand everything you are singing, here. I usually prefer the version by Louis Armstrong, even though he had a voice that rattled, even when he spoke.

You should definitely keep this song in your set of songs you can do anywhere at a moment's notice.


"When the daylight is rising up in my eyes ..." - Klaus Meine

Offline

 

#3 2014-11-04 18:31:07

bono1982
TMV Forum Member
From: Argentina
Registered: 2014-10-28
Posts: 31
Reputation :   
Website

Re: What a wonderful world

Hi ronws! thank you so much for your response :)


check out to my souncloud page! :) 
https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1

Offline

 

#4 2014-11-12 10:28:58

Marcus
TMV Forum Member
From: UmeƄ, Sweden
Registered: 2009-08-08
Posts: 203
Reputation :   

Re: What a wonderful world

Hey bono, this was real good! Very nice timbre. I like the jazz approach on this one.

If you want anything to improve (this is just a minor thing though), it's that you at some places kinda "slide around" a bit too much before hitting the notes spot on. Nothing gamebreaking, just a detail :)

Offline

 

#5 2014-11-12 21:27:49

BlackieJane
TMV Forum Member
From: Toronto
Registered: 2014-08-11
Posts: 14
Reputation :   

Re: What a wonderful world

Hey,

I thought you did a really good job. You have a really nice tone and your pronunciation is really good considering English isn't your first language. Overall, you have a great voice. I'm a big Louis Armstrong fan, so I love the song choice. I love jazz and blues personally, so my advice would be to study Louis a bit more. Although his voice was a one-of-a-kind, he was so huge in changing the way singing was approached and he influenced a lot of other singers. If you want that jazz feel, try playing around with the time and connect the time with the telling of the story.  I mean, that's if you even do jazz or want to do jazz.  If you do, listen to Louis solo on trumpet and try to follow those and then eventually veer off and tell the story your way. I'm only giving this advice because I think you have an awesome voice and think you could pull it off.
Good job though.


Newbie Vocalist

Offline

 

#6 2014-11-18 23:20:01

bono1982
TMV Forum Member
From: Argentina
Registered: 2014-10-28
Posts: 31
Reputation :   
Website

Re: What a wonderful world

Thank you Marcus and BlackieJane for you kind words and for your advices, i find them accurate and useful. I know i have some troubles with time.. i think it is a great idea to listen to Louis Amstrong solo on the trumpet, i`ll do it! :)


check out to my souncloud page! :) 
https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1

Offline

 

#7 2014-11-19 02:04:28

MDEW
TMV Forum Member
Registered: 2012-06-24
Posts: 2866
Reputation :   32 

Re: What a wonderful world

Sounds good. Smooth, Resonant, Warm, Wonderful. :)


"Knock me down, It's all in vain. I'll get right back on my feet again."  Pat Benatar

Offline

 
OTHER TMV WEB SITES: TMV RECOMMENDS: TMV RECOMMENDS: TMV RECOMMENDS:

Adverts

Board footer

Powered by FluxBB
Hosted by PunBB-Hosting